I received the "I Apologize for this Poem" Challenge from John Hansen and said that I would give it a go. I am terrible at challenges but will submit my feeble attempt.
Here is a link to John's input on this challenge. He did an amazing job.
The apology poem was created by William Carlos Williams in his poem "This Is Just to Say." It is a poem to apologize for something that the speaker has done or said.
To read this poem check out Sheri Jacobs' article 'Calling All Poets and Teachers.'
"There's no wrong way to write an apology poem, as there are no set rules. When William Carlos Williams wrote "This Is Just to Say," no one had ever created a poem quite like this before." John Hansen
So with a spiral-bound notebook and pen in hand, I attempted to write my own version of the Apology Poem.
Draft One
Sounded more like a real apology and lacked the "backhanded" quality. Which I soon discovered was the real challenge of this challenge, making it backhanded. Draft one crumbled up and hit the trash can.
Draft Two
Too long, not sincere enough, complicated message won't fit three stanzas. Crumbled up and missed the trash can this time.
Draft Three
Not really happy with it, but this is what I'm submitting after a couple of tweaks.
Catatude Apology
I'm sorry I
acted badly
when you brought
home a kitten sadly.
I should have
been understanding
about an addition
to our family.
But you didn't ask
what I thought
So was it
really my fault
Here are the original tags from John's story.
Pamela Oglesby,Misbah Sheikh,Martin Morrison,Prazunt,Nikolaos Skordilis,Shereen Bingham,Raine Lore,Carolyn Hastings,Denise Kendig,Sheila McCall,TzeLin Sam
I'm adding a few additional tags.
Adrienne Beaumont- Katie Michaelson — Chantell — CosmicDancer — Mustapha El Hajj — Mukundarajan V N — Dave Karpowicz — Gary L Ellis —
